Hi Azaria,My name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you tried to use power in your writing to add more detail in your writing. Mabe next time you could think of doing an animation on hairstyles! If you would like to see my class blog it is at wpsriceman.blogspot.com/ or my own bog it is at wpsbrooklynl.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Azaria,My name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you tried to use power in your writing to add more detail in your writing. Mabe next time you could think of doing an animation on hairstyles! If you would like to see my class blog it is at wpsriceman.blogspot.com/ or my own bog it is at wpsbrooklynl.blogspot.co.nz/
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